


First Chapter Review
The first chapter review includes:
Comments on the first chapter of your manuscript (up to 10 pages of standard manuscript formatting)
A one-page editorial letter summarizing my feedback on the first chapter, including suggestions for next steps
A 30-minute video call to discuss my feedback and suggested next steps.
The first chapter review includes:
Comments on the first chapter of your manuscript (up to 10 pages of standard manuscript formatting)
A one-page editorial letter summarizing my feedback on the first chapter, including suggestions for next steps
A 30-minute video call to discuss my feedback and suggested next steps.
The first chapter review includes:
Comments on the first chapter of your manuscript (up to 10 pages of standard manuscript formatting)
A one-page editorial letter summarizing my feedback on the first chapter, including suggestions for next steps
A 30-minute video call to discuss my feedback and suggested next steps.
Please note that this is a developmental review and will focus on story-level issues such as plot, character, emotion, and pacing. I am not trained as a line or copy editor and do not offer those services.